Feedback

Every month we are given feedback sheets from our teachers to do peer assessments. We work in pairs to evaluate each others work and provide feedback for each other. This was the feedback that I got for my blog.

For each point I have created a solution as to how I could improve:

 

- Video doesn't show - the school internet does not allow YouTube, which is what I posted the video to. I could try to find a different way to present my videos.

- Need more member analysis - To improve on this I will finish each band member post and then create a real profile on each of them including pictures.

- Need to use videos a lot more - I plan to create focus groups asking my target audience about the song and what ideas would appeal to them.

- Male and female gaze theory - I will research into this theory and relate it back to how girl bands are portrayed in the news.